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The Pieces

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September 15, 2011
The Pieces by ~Same-side An emotional child acting out to get what she wants. This short script shows how important good dynamic can be to deliver a whole story in a single contained scene.
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(Lights up on a young girl child, sitting on a pink patchwork quilt on the floor of a nursery.)

GIRL

Pieces taste good.  Ripped-up, tasty bits.  Candy-tasty.  Won't you let me taste a taste?  Sweet and juicy, please.

(GIRL sticks her fingers in her mouth and closes her eyes.)

Just a taste.  The last taste, the best ever.  I want it.  Want it.

(GIRL removes her fingers, but keeps her eyes closed.)

Dee-lish.  So yummy, goody.  The pieces.  Just want a tasty taste.

(GIRL opens her eyes, and gets up on her knees.)

Please, it, I need so bad!  I want them so, so much.  So much.  I hurt, please, give.  They good for me, just please.

(GIRL stands up, approaches audience, ready to throw a tantrum.)

Give me!  Now!  Or I rip it myself, give!  You're being mean, stop it!  I want the pieces!  Pieces, pieces, pieces!  You pig-snot, potty-face!  Give me!

(From offstage, a bloody side of meat is tossed on the quilt.  GIRL turns and sees.  GIRL looks back at audience and blows a sugar-sweet kiss.  Lights down.  END OF PLAY)
Perhaps, this shouldn't be labeled as a comedic piece, but I think it reads more funny than serious.


Written for the #House-of-Playwrights Weekly-ish Prompt: Savagery
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Little-Red-Hat's avatar
Clever twist ending. Dark and ghoulish, but a great piece.